A picture for a fic. I don't know, if I will draw a comics, or only some pictures.... It will be a toko story. I don't know why, but this pairing is so cute X3 My favorite ship for the moment.
Zuko belongs to Nick. Tian Xia belongs to me X3 __________________________________
ATLA: another generation
So, this story takes place in 2010. The four nations live together in harmony. To prove it, the representative of each nation: the fire lord, the earth king, the chief of water tribe and the avatar ( who represents the air nomades, even if, he is the last airbender) live in the same town. This town is totally neutral, and each nation is symbolized by a skycraper. All bender live in harmony, even if there are some problems, but a police was created to resolve those problems.
To begin this story, we need a boy. This boy is Zuko, son of the fire lord ans he is 20 years old. He is a good firebender, but not as strong as his little sister. Despite of this, he was considered as the heir of the fire nation. However, during his training, he had an accident and he destroyed unintentionaly an important building, which belongs to the earth kingdom. During this accident, he was injured: a scar on his face. To prevent a war, the fire lord has disowned Zuko, and chased him away of his own house. During a long period of time, he was depressed, and miserable. But, thanks to his uncle Iroh, and his friend Tian Xia, he overcomes those problems, and changes his mind. Now, he lives, on the 2nd floor of his uncle's cafe: The Jasmine dragon. After the school, he helps his uncle and his friend in the café. Most of the customers are girls because of the waiters.
Zuko's friend, Tian Xia is an 19-year old earthbender, that's why, he is always barefoot in the café. . He helps Zuko, because, he understands him: Tian Xia is a one-eyed man, but he hides it and he has lost his family, when he was 5. As Zuko, he lives on the 2nd floor of the café. Moreover, he was the disciple of a famous earthbender. And so, he can become "the earth itself", that's why, he is an incredible earthbender. But, he is always joking, smiling and not very serious. So, nobody notice his potential, except Zuko.
ENFIN!!! Tu fais des décors soignés ! (Ce n'est qu'en ,on ,oi intérieur que je te dirai le mot fatidique: perspective (?) pour les immeubles mais c'est déjà un trèèèèès grand pas en avant pour t'éaméliorer )
Mais quand même: je dois admettre qu'il y a du travail pour des détails comme le bois près du premier plan pour le comptoir avec des nuances de marron, l'ombre de la plante à gauche, du soin pour le tronc et les feuilles en incorporant une teinte de jaune pour apporter de la chaleur: J'aime beaucoup le ciel et les nuages avec de subtils dégradés et un contraste séaratif avec du blanc bien maîtrisé:
L'effet de la vitrine est léger et s'intègre bien au dessin (trop de détail avec des reflets et des jeux de lumière diffractés tuerait l'équilibre). Un gros travail d'ombre mais encore perfectible (pour le plafond et de légers autres détails comme pour certaines chaises et les rebords de la vitrine). Néanmoins, il est indéniable que ce dessin montre que tu progresses Joy
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Mais c'est moi ou, tes gars sont de plus en plus anorexiques depuis un moment? ^^"
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La meilleur façon de commettre un crime est de le faire légalement. XD
L'effet de la vitrine est léger et s'intègre bien au dessin (trop de détail avec des reflets et des jeux de lumière diffractés tuerait l'équilibre). Un gros travail d'ombre mais encore perfectible (pour le plafond et de légers autres détails comme pour certaines chaises et les rebords de la vitrine). Néanmoins, il est indéniable que ce dessin montre que tu progresses
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